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Remember

Remember a love
that we once shared?
Remember a time
when we both cared?

Remember the way
we held so tight
in endless passion
all through the night?

But something died in us
some where along the line.
We both wanted more
than just yours or mine.

So here we are
together again.
I'm tired of other women
and you of other men.

A little older and wiser
We both may be.
So lets look for the love
we lost to be free!

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  • cazzy71
    June 24
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    thank you for entering

    Thankyou for taking an inter est in my contest,I feel this entry is cute,simple but so effective.


  • NitroCircus
    June 13
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    . I hope that this happens to me. Ha. I'm going through a rough patch. Thank you for entering


  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    June 9

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    Oh awesome!
    Love the hope you expressed in this one! It's wonderful when love can come back together like that.

    Thanks for sharing!


  • trekkergirl
    October 26, 2008

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    this is a nice poem. A poem about love found, lost, and hopefully regained. Thanks for sharing this very nice little write. And thanks for entering it into my contest.

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck, Josie


  • Willowhaunt
    February 10, 2008

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    A bit short and Doctor Seuss-ish. The idea is there, but I think the poem isn't as developed as the content. Work on it, it could be great.

    Keep Quilling,
    Whiskey


  • leander Moderators member
    December 15, 2007

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    This is actually quite a beautiful story that you have written here the message 'if you are born to be with each other, you finally will' radiates very clearly from your words

    Good rhyme and rhythm!
    Leander


  • TheStupidLamb
    December 1, 2007
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    Thanks for your entry and good luck!


  • micol
    November 23, 2007

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    Quiet, gentle...and passionate. You handle the rhythms and rhymes very well, echoing the clarity and directness of what the poem is saying. Well done.


  • useles
    November 9, 2007

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    True love is never lost. You dont have to try to find it because it will find you. Good write and good luck in my contest


  • Death of the Author
    October 5, 2007

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    This is really excellent, you've written it very well. It flows nicely and the rhyme is good

    The stanzas all fit together so well and the last one is great!

    Welcome to Allpoetry and I hope you have a good time here x take care x

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