I hear our song so slow
I never realized how much
Possibly because
Whenever we were together
Time flied, too fast
All together, before I knew it
You were gone
And all that’s left is me
Dancing alone
Underneath the stars
Dancing alone
To a song no one knows
I wish so much
I wasn’t dancing alone
Memories fill my head
Of the time that we spent
Full of loving and caring
Where could it have gone?
Nothing between us is left
And there’s nothing I regret
But now there’s nothing more
Than me
Dancing alone
Underneath the stars
Dancing alone
To a song no one knows
I wish so much
I wasn’t dancing alone
Our time together was short
At too short for me
And I long for the time past
The time we had
But I know better
I will try to live one
But for now
There’s only me
Dancing alone
Underneath the stars
Dancing alone
To a song no one knows
I wish so much
I wasn’t dancing alone
I wish so much
That I wasn’t
Alone
Author notes
I wanna be whatever you want, maybe a pet, perchance your faithful penguin.
OPTION 1:
Pick a title and let it flow
Title: Dancing Alone
A slow sad country song
A contest entry
- THE MEGA OPTIONS CONTEST by H4rd Kisses.
475 points, ended November 7, 2007, 22 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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idn
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this was sad and heart breaking
but your words touched my heart
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Good Job. I like this. Keep up the good work and don't stop penning.
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Oh great take on the prompt
Well done
Excellent addition into the contest
Best of luck to you.
delila
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How exciting, the first entry!
This was very good. You just took that title and ran with it! I don't know if it was meant to be a song but it reads like one to me. Like one they would put in a music box with the ballerina dancer dancing alone. Great job with this one, I really love it!
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I originaly didnt mean for it to be a song but now that i think about it it could be, thank you!!
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aww...this is sweet...and very very good...
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Thank you!!
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you're welcome!!
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this reminds me of Avril Lavigne's song When You're Gone. Almost.
It's one of your better writes, i think. it flows pretty well.
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In all honesty i have never heard that song *shrug* anyways thanks!
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is it that good?
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YES!
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i'll look it up later at home kay?
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oooooooooooooootay!
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