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I miss you

I miss you,
I don't know how to say it,
I don't know how to show it,
but I miss you.
I will always miss you.

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  • Turtledove
    November 9, 2007

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    So sad when someone leaves

    To be left alone is a terrible tragedy. Maybe you can't show it or say it, but you certainly feel it! Nice write.


  • Beating gold member
    October 8, 2007

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    This is so simple, it's actually found its beauty. I love that. The last line kind of bugs me though. I would change it to "I always will", because the repetition of miss you makes it kind of cheesy or something. Other than that, very beautiful!