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Candy

I gazed at her from afar
Smudged mascarra, cherry red lips
Hair the colour of black tar
A body abused by far to many pimps

Her name on the street was Candy
With her black whorish clothes
At night seeing cruel men who were randy
This was a life that she loathed

Candy had many mouths to feed
A heroin husband and five kids
All of whom were in need
And when Daddy got angry they all hid

Everynight Candy worked her street
Everyday Candy was a abused
Her life was a cruel feat
One day Candy was gone, killed by a man- abused and used

Candy you never knew
But I loved you

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'disguised as a hero to get past your borders'
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  • genderideals--
    October 7, 2007
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    this is a very sad story, and i hope this didn't happen... i'm incredibly sorry if it did.

  • lyrebird
    October 7, 2007
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    tragic

    a really sad poem to read. poor candy, having to provide for her family.


  • bedovich
    October 7, 2007
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    pooor candy:S:S :S God help many of those like her:S:S


  • Bluebook Pet
    October 7, 2007
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    So pure sad, this is really happening. Poor candy and many like her.