I know it as
the apprehension
of the unrevealed
plucking and clenching
at the organ of love
Intimidated yet curious
cautiosuly taking
that first step
aiming
to be open-minded
Frolic and discover
as two
more so than one
strolling easily along together
Eyes opening up
Optimistically both
want more
Tick, Tock
a thousand words in
a picture painted
Bright hearts with
ability to beat as one
To hurt for her
To love for him
To fight
for them
promising not
'till the day I die'
But
each new day
we arise together
love you I will and
support you, I'll try
never doubt
you will always be
My whole world
Author notes
option4 - Write about Love for Randomness contest - Shutterbug
A contest entry
- Kill me or Love me by luna-midnight.
600 points, ended October 5, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Creativity and the Illusion by Ephiphany.
650 points, ended October 6, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For Love by live in love.
500 points, ended October 9, 2007, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - randomness!!! by shutter-bug.
600 points, ended October 22, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Contest!! Please enter!! by With Broken Wings.
1200 points, ended March 15, 2008, 102 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - MAD IN LOVE ! (PREWRITES ALLOWED )(EASIEST CONTEST ) by Alex Hex.
300 points, ended May 8, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is cute nice job=P sarah
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woooooooooooooooooooooooooow !! this is a very good love poem !! man you do have a million talent !!
thank you so much for entering the contest and best wishes in it ,
your friend , fan and host ,
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This is a lovely poem Cin....just reeks of unrestrained love ....well done indeed...
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hehehehehehe
thanx you darling
Cin
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very sweet. can you please put the option number in the authors box? this was sweet, and made me think. definately deep. thank you for entering!
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Awww thanx. I thought I had, maybe I closed down the page too soon or sumthing, lol. But thanx for pointing out and I fixed it up
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cindyanne
this is beautiful, I love the title which started a wonderful journey of fulfilled reading. Thank you for your entry, I appreciate it.
ephiphany
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cindyanne
Thank you, im touched by your kind words
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wow great job!
this one is very cute and a nice flow.
i like the way you show they should share hurt and pain along with the love and goodness!
thanks for your entry, and good luck!
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Thank you, this one is about me and my fiance'. Our journey, we have been together 3yr's and like it should indeed be I think too, We have had both good and bad times
Thanks for a lovely comment Stephanie
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"To hurt for her
To love for him
To fight
for them"
mmm that was a really strong stanza, really creative with good emotion. Keep this up and good luck in the contest
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canvas
Thank you, thats one of my favourite parts also
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This is such a great poem and so fitting for this contest. I love the contrasts you have given here and i really quite enjoyed the style of this. WEll done and all the best for the contest.
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Thank you muchly, for kind kind words
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