Come here you sexy man,
I will pleasure you if I can.
I will bring you to ecstasy,
let you live your fantasies.
I will make you truly orgasm,
your body will surely spasm.
You will want to never let go,
it is me you will forever hold.
Author notes
TexasMomma aka Ellan Arlena Halsell Bonham
A contest entry
- Make me go "ooh!!"...(Adults Only)-Prewrites Welcome! by Daizy21.
450 points, ended October 13, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I liked this one alot. My imagination took me place with this one.
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I was expecting more. I thought it was forced in places and the rhyming scheme didnt work for me... sorry
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This was beautifully done and I love the form. It was structured perfectily. You have done quite well here. Thank you for sharing this with me and best wishes. Keep that pen handy dear poet. ~Midnight Lace
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I want more,I want more!oooohh!Thanks for the entry...Good luck!
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