Summers become winters
with the bitterness and cold
of a love you thought would last.
The snowflakes are your silent tears,
falling coldly, only to be forgotten by
the millions more that pile above it.
The feelings will melt, like the snow,
under your feet, as you struggle
to walk away from the seasons.
Seasons, like feelings change.
Some warm, some cold,
over and over.
You cant change the cycle,
but you can cherish the moment.
In a list
A contest entry
- A fond farewell by xbyebyebeauty.
369 points, ended October 5, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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I just re read all the poems that were entered into my contest, and I just want to say again, how amazing this poem is. It was super easy to give you the gold.
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Excellent
An easy choise for the gold.
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PHENOMENAL!!!! This is an EXCELLENT write my friend - outstanding imagery and thought provoking too
Loved this one - DEFINITELY 3 claps!!!!
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Amazing
This was really great.
And I loved the title you picked..it's one of my favorites.
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