Is there anyone brave enough to take me on?
Capture my heart,
and you will capture my soul,
this girl promises to do anything she is told.
My man must be strong, not weak.
Knows exactly what he wants,
exactly what he seeks.
I will bring you pleasure,
accept your pain,
and within my flesh,
I will drive your body insane.
Ropes and cuffs is what this girl needs,
a good hard spanking will keep this Naughty Nakeia on her knees.
This 40 year old fiery red head hot woman awaits your call,
When it comes to sex I will give you my all.
Call me and let see what the future has in store.
Dial 555-LUST and you may be the one knocking on my door.
Author notes
this is an entry for Master Ktulu's erotic challenges. we were to write a personal ad for this round.
http://allpoetry.com/column/show/2338440
Please tell me what you think
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My opinion:
The presentation could've been worked on a little more, but quite honestly, the rhyming was spot on and Nakeia sounds as though she's in for some fun
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This is great my dear lady
and it makes you sound sweet
for the right man that is
for then he will have a treat
good luck dear
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thank you for taking the time to read and comment. the upcoming challenges should be interesting and real challenges.
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AWESOME!!! YOu did a great job for this round. I loved that you added the number in the closing. GREAT GREAT idea. You made this unique and interesting
Mel
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thank you so much for your kind words. i have a feeling these challenges, as usual will be interesting and i pity the judges for having to make their decisions.
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I thought that ad needed an answer
You think I'll be knocking on your door?
You need another think and a whole lot more
You come to mine and wait on your knees
While I decide if I hear your pleas
I'll strap you down and beat each cheek
Keep you going for a whole long week
I'll pull you round on a stout leather lead
I think you'll find I can answer your need!
Monty
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omg....... i really loved the way you commented on my ad here. i'm flabbergast, at a lost for words and those who knows me knows that it is not often i don't have a response here. thank you for your comment and the way you did commented.
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I always try to match comments to content, and if possible in verse. Thanks for your kind words, and best of luck.
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Very interesting personal ad, shimmer. I loved the phone number bit too. Kudos on the rhyme scheme too, a job well done.
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thank you Master Ktulu, i'm looking forward to the challenges that you have planned for us.
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love the dial 555-LUST - original
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lol thank you for the comment Tattboyspet. i'm glad you liked the number.
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