INTIMATE INTENTIONS-ACROSTIC
Intense fire from our lovemaking heats up the room
Next to you I feel my heart beat uncontrollably
Time passes so slowly as we collide continuously
Into another place and time so far from reality
Making me quiver as you massage and take me all the way inside of you
Amazing is this feeling, one I haven't felt for so long
Teasing and stroking every inch of my manhood
Enticing and seducing every part of my heart and soul
In your arms I feel so secure and alive
Nothing could ever come between the love that we both share
Touching every part of your gorgeous body
Each tender sensation carrying us over the threshold of love
Never wanting this to end I pull out of you and throw you on the bed
Tasting every part of your luscious body with my hungry tongue
Intensity builds and you suddenly explode all over me
Opening your legs, I push you up onto my shoulders
Now as I press you up against the wall I thrust into you
So soft and beautiful as I slowly release you and kiss your tender lips
Author notes
Thanks a lot for holding this contest!
I had a lot of fun writing this one.
A contest entry
- MAKE LOVE TO ME ADULTS ONLY 18^ by onesugar.
450 points, ended October 7, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me go "ooh!!"...(Adults Only)-Prewrites Welcome! by Daizy21.
450 points, ended October 13, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hi again...I just had to read it again!...please just add your name in the authors box!Thanks!
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Great job, Jeremy
I see you've heated the ladies up once again, and I can see why!! Extremely hot write, my friend.
Brazos
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Great
You have done a great job here, yoou leave your readers wanting more, great write, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
rainogddess
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Ooo - Ahh - and Ohh.. Such sweet heat!
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I loved this! It flows so beautifully like love. You did a great job! Keep Writing!!!
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WHEWWWWWWWW
damn Jeremy!!!!
you are always writing these pieces!!!!
so dirty but with such love!!!!!
was truly an amazing write that you have penned here thats for sure!!!!
yout lady must be a lucky girl...your so passionate!!!
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Super Seductive and sensual
I love this write my friend You are so hot an talent. Love you passion
LISA
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Well done piece.
Definately a heated piece.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Tory
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Lick 'em High...definately low
Jeremy...I told you Mr Romeo...I liked this my friend, you have such a romantic heart and it shows well in this piece.
Ode to jeremy
ephiphany
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Hi Jeremy
Again this was one hot write
thank you once again for taking
part in my fisrt contest
~sugar~ -
oh this is great and you know your Acrostics
really get to my heart strings
Riftkin -
this was fucken delicious (((SCREAMING )))you sucker the ladies of dead pussy coffins going to melt in misery as this is unfair of teasing our clitoris i shall leave the building o my
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Wow!
This is so very hot and so elegantly passionate
Visions of a night of intense lovemaking danced through my head
Well done
Wishing you the best in the contest -
A very beautiful piece. The images were vivid...the passion was very clear. I especially loved your word choice: sentimental. Good job.
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This is excellent - should be in my contest
Love the way it rose to the occasion. nicely done.
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This is so hottt! Love it man I really do
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Hot Hot Hot...thank you for entering...good Luck!
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Whew a second round of heat.
I loved this just as much as the other one
I still need to stop reading these at work
delila
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WOW!
Loved the feel to this HOT! phew
Thank you for entering
Good Luck
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Very steamy in here...WOW! 
I feel like I just ran into someones room!!!!! excellent take on the prompt...excellent job!!!
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