Was waiting for your call... never happened
Missed you while you were gone.... never got it back
Heart broken, you said i love you.... i wasn't there
Sad, it over...... never had the guts to say " im done"
Crying, she ended it...... with the other guy
Who's sorry now?.... you... like usual... i forgive
His lips, so much softer than yours
His tongue.... quite pierced... more jagged.... more dangerous
Who's sorry now?.... you..... like usual.....
Love of his.... so pure... unconditional
Who's sorry now?... me... for wasting my heart on you....
Author notes
this is option #1
A contest entry
- Three options, give me your best by Brucie.
415 points, ended October 10, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Brilliant
I really enjoyed this and found it quite inspiring. The rythm is very well done. Thankyou for your entry. -
this is sad but, inspiring at the same time. by that i mean, someone may read this and take stock of the relationship they are in. it's not always easy to say goodbye but sometimes you just have to before too much of you is gone. i wish you all the best in th is contest, be well and be blessed
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