I wish I was a doll,
with blackberry shaped buttons,
and eyes as blue
as the pools of
the ocean.
with feet as danity
as
flower petals,
dancing softly to their death
This is what I wish to be.
I wish to have
lips as red
as the blood
that courses through my veins,
and the will
that is as strong as steel,
I wish my life
was a simple
as yours.
Gently
playing with innocence.
I wish,
I was a doll.
In a list
...I'm writing just to write...
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Awww
Always amazing and beautifully written as always. I just imagine your fingers dancing accross the keyboard, this poem is beautiful dear and very sing songy like. It's also got an odd errieness about it...although I don't think that I can easy explain that, at least not in my own words and weird thinking. Wishing to be a doll sounds nice and all but wouldn't suck if the only way you could move was from the help from some person? lol jk
~Tess!
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awwww
very beautiful. (:
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and what a lovely doll you are
I mean you would be...this is adorable, and had a fun flow for me, kind like I was dancing with a doll feel...I delighted in this upbeat feeling poem...thank you for sharing...~blessings~
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lovely
Colorful geisha doll poem lovely etc etc etc.
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ths is great writing i love the way you wrote this. you write verry beautifuly ( :
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