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I Need You

I need you here with me

I need that one person who really lift my spirits, and that person is you
I need to be hugged in a way that only you can hug me
I need the sicerity of your smile that makes me smile back
I need to feel the power of a magnet, that only your eyes posses

I need to be graced with lips that completly soothe me, but only your kiss can do the job
I need the energy to sustain, but you are my Gatorade
I need that high that relaxes me, but you are my drug
I need to illuminate the darkness of my thoughts, but you are my light

I need to be taken to that place where there's no more problems, but only you know the directions
I need the motivation to keep going, but you are my strength
I need a refill on my swagger, but you are my confidence
I need the one who I trust with my heart, the heart that you hold

I need you here with me

And without you here...

It's hard to be me

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  • quantumsurveyor
    November 12, 2007

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    Well expressed sentiments that go to the heart of the problem. The constant repetition of the "I" gives unity and strength to a neat piece of writing. Thanks so much for sharing.


  • Sacrificial Love
    November 5, 2007

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    Ok....

    Now this is beautiful....I love it..."I need a refill on my swagger"...I have a piece I wrote that has a line "He puts a lil more sway to my swagger"... I guess great minds think alike


  • SOLS.Moonlight
    October 5, 2007

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    Awwwwww........This is really deep. It's gonna be hard each day ya'll are apart, but I like that you two are keeping the love strong. I agree with Dre on that newlywed military couple thing for real.


  • blakdiamone
    October 5, 2007
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    Aaaaaw ain't that so cuuute? U guys are like a newlywed military couple. LOL, anyways, a couple of spelling errors Eltee, but still all is good. I know the feelin when you need something and you can't have it cause SHE got it especially that
    "prize in between" it's HELL, Hell I TELL YOUU! Naw I'm bein stupid though, this is good though.


  • Expression
    October 4, 2007

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    awww babi somehow i'll be with you soon, somewhere somehow i will be with you but until then i'm still with you in spirit cuz ur the only one who got my heart please jus hang in there babi we'll be wit each other again soon i love you *mwah*

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