If i told you i needed you
to survive
that without you
im gasping for air
would you be sorry then?
If i cried until i bled
because you left me
with no one else
there to catch my fall
would you be sorry then?
If i took everything
you ever cared for
and smashed it
into the ground
would you be sorry then?
If i ripped your heart out
only using a plastic fork
slowly forcing your insides
out into the open
would you be sorry then?
No
of course not
you'll never be sorry
cause i will always be.
I'm the sorry one now.
Author notes
wow. this is so not me. im not an angry person usually. but it is extremly personal.
umm yeah it was for a contest. it was a picture inspiration.
A contest entry
- Three options, give me your best by Brucie.
415 points, ended October 10, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You've done a great job here. I didn't actually read it so much as angry, more vulnerable and hurt. Thankyou for your entry, I enjoyed reading it. -
this is great.you have a gift.keep it up.you'll go far.
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well i like it. i like the flow. i like how it seems to just slowly get more and more angry and exciting. i can tell too by reading this that you dont seem like an angry person. there is something vulnerable about it.
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