question.
when definite answers
are restrictions
on discovery's potential,
is it worth
accusations for
questionable contemplations?
...best not to ask.
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"falling through fault lines"
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie by seraphim shock.
500 points, ended October 4, 2007, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great job! Grats on your bronze!
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This is great, but I count 21 words, I don't know if it matters. But I really like this!!
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Thanks. After much aggravation, I got it down to 20.
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WOW. I love this. it's so deep, and the images are beautiful. this is just stunning. lovely question to ask too... great job.
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...this is beautiful, but it's 32 words. you have 8 minutes to shorten it.
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working at it. this is hard.... gah.
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Prompt: "falling through fault lines"
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hah, good luck. two quickies...nice.
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I notice there's a couple other people in both too. Besides, this certainly beats doing my physics homework...
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