Walking for miles on end
Learning lessons everywhere
Days on end pass by consistently
Experience growing like leaves on a tree
The path of the mind
Followed endlessly
Young people dismiss it
Saying strength is now man's dream
A challenge decided
Experience gearing up
Wisdom and knowledge conquering
To the astonishment of the young
A generation now realizes
The mind opens opportunity
You cannot count on strength to dominate
But wisdom shall prevail
A contest entry
- Read The Tale.. Get Inspired.. by raspberry.
2000 points, ended October 12, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is indeed very wel lwritten. such a powerful truth told in simple, yet fine terms. Very good. Thankyou for taking time to enter the ocntest..
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