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Your Worst Offense

I resolved this by deciding
To never send a word to you
To never give you the privilege of a look
I stood resolute, unmoving in my choice
And even though
I endured the pain of not
Being able to see your face
Or hear your voice
What hurt the most was that

You didn't even notice

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  • Purple-Meow
    October 23, 2007
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    NICE WRITE
    i loved everything about this poem
    GOOD LUCK


  • Trixie08
    October 23, 2007

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    WOW this is a powerful and hard hitting piece. It's in your face. You really captured what it means to have a broken heart.


  • Rachel21
    October 9, 2007

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    your poetry is all so sad, are you ok? or just in one of those moods? This poem is somewhat heart breaking, that guy is just mean! i really like your poetry, no wonder you're in my favorites haha

    • tigress3737
      October 9, 2007
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      Yes, I'm fine, thank you for your concern I was just in a mood and I dont really know why all my poetry is so sad, I realized that too, I think I just get inspiration when I'm in those situations