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Powerful

Pretty Pink

  Chick

    shirt slick

Shiny blue

    Sideways into the world

Make it all yours, RULE!

A contest entry

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 6, 2007
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    Well done


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 4, 2007
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    nicely written
    best of luck dear poet
    in this contest

    Riftkin


  • HeavenScent4U
    October 4, 2007
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    very nice. kind of just describing the picture UNTIL you get to the last two lines and i appreciate that very much now i feel kind of bad that i edited the angle of the picture thanks for entering and best of luck. be well and be blessed

    • butterflywriter
      October 4, 2007
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      well, it started with the angle of the picture

      but then reminded me of something I read about sliding into life sideways with chocolate in one hand and something or other in the other hand, kind of like a ballplayer slides into Home Plate and that shirt is like jersey...like the idea of that, you're welcome.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 4, 2007
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    wow this rocks! nice poem of a teen thanks for sharing and good luck..mm


  • crimsondew
    October 4, 2007
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    Love it...sort of like my take on the picture
    All the best!

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