Heart's ache and heart's ease,
the only purpose within the torn crimson shards.
Fractured to an unseen point ever felt yet never seen,
where no love remains to patch back together.
Trust broken and hope ripped away.
One person stealing dreams as they carelessly leave.
Affection and devotion severed by cruel words,
aversion and resentment blooming effortlessly.
Passion remaining only within the blood,
lingering on the floor as it slips off the scarlet blade,
Each drop gone, one less to kindle pain,
the damage irreversible and always their fault.
One death to stain unbloodied hands,
a broken lover laying within a cold, unforgiving grave.
Forever forgotten from all memories,
truth never to be revealed.
Not a whisper remaining among the leaves of a knowing tree,
a noose of hatred silencing all.
Author notes
I was in a wonderful mood, so of course a poem about love torn away was the topic I write about.
For Razorsedges contest, option 2.
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My first poem on here, what do people thing?
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way to start out with a bang this has some captivating qualities imagery passion emotion wonderful a most enjoyable poem thanx for the entry
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This poem is interesting, however it does not follow the rules in the description of my contest. Sorry.
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Sorry, I didn't realize about the rule of pre-writes. Perhaps, next time. Once again, sorry.
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this was great and you wrote it beautifully...thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck in it.
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Welcome to the site!
Love being torn away can and does have lasting deep scars, a very relatable poem here
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