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Individuality

Individuality shines
bright as magenta
Energized thoughts
As the "belt" that binds,
freedom of speech declared

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    October 8, 2007

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    Nice,

    Another beauty here sweet soul!
    Thanks for sharing your wonderful writes here.
    Congrates on the HM as well.

    Peace, Timothy


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 4, 2007
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    nice
    mention of the belt
    just not the word

    sweet

    Riftkin


  • HeavenScent4U
    October 4, 2007

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    i really like this but i think you might have a typo in the word crinsom, may you have meant crimson? and crimson is so over used but i still love the poem. i will come back to see if you made any changes before i actually judge as soon as i am done commenting thanks for entering and best of luck. be well and be blessed

    i love what you did with the last two lines, most excellent


  • crimsondew
    October 4, 2007
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    Very well done on the 'freedom of speech' part..
    All the best!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 4, 2007
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    this is so good.. good luck...mm


  • thepoetssoul
    October 4, 2007

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    Wow good take on the prompt.
    Love the wording and vision
    Best of wishes to you

    Tony

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