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Napping

Reams of poetry,
I write in my mind,
Lying here in your arms,
Inspired.....

Not wanting to move
To record this feeling,
Of awe..... in the pain of loving,
Of amazement;
At the pleasure......

So I am,
Here,
Still.......
Listening to you snore.
The tides of your breath
Carrying away
My most worthy notes.



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  • Nicole Cudworth
    November 6, 2007

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    No comment just a thank you for entering. I have no words for this.

    Love and luck in all you endeavor.