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My Message to You...

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If only I could lift the heavy weight
carried in your heart,
I would ease all pain

ripping your world apart.

If only I could dry your tears
fill your voids with love,

your emptiness would disappear
and release your inner fears.

If only I could I would hold you -tight
show you, tell you everything will be alright;
I'd ask you to let me guide you for short while
walk with you through life's strife.

If only I could reach inside
remove all demons
that linger in your mind,
so to bring back
your precious smile
lost in time.

If only I could shield you from all harm,
you could draw from my strength;
place your hand in mine

besides each other,

for you I'm here my friend. 



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  • Theroseislovely
    October 6, 2007

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    What a delightful and truthful message

    This poem was your very heart and soul speaking volumes. A true gem of a friend you must be. I am honored to had the oppurtunity to have read your words of wisdom, intellect, and beauty.
  • Brokenpen
    October 5, 2007
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    lovley

    as always u have struck something in me.
    you are the most tender and caring person i know.
    i loved this.
    well done mom.
    *smile*

  • jo-el
    October 5, 2007
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    a heart filled extension of yourself in the true spirit of friendship. i like it


  • pearl-dragon
    October 5, 2007

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    You have a lovely way of expressing your feelings in this offer of love and friendship. Your final stanza describes so perfectly what friends do for each other. Good luck in this contest.


  • tomisb gold member
    October 5, 2007

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    The hardest part of love and enlightenment is letting the one we want to give it to find it for themselves. Humans are funny. We only value what we earn.
    Love, Tom B.


  • Stardust-luvr
    October 4, 2007
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    beautiful words and i truly call you friend this ahs brought me to tears but not of sadness but of inspiration of wondrous tomorrows. I thank you for coming into my life upon this site and not only sharing our poetry but sharing within each other thak you and many loving blessings always xxx

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