I thought I would write a poem for you
To brighten up your day
But there is one big problem:
I have nothing new to say
You know I think your pretty
And I would risk my life for you
You know that I love your eyes
And I love your cute smile too
You know I want to hold your hand
Forever, and that is true
And whenever I am feeling sad
You know just what to do
You know that I like to look at the stars
Under the big white moon
But only with a special girl
Which happens to be you
A contest entry
- Teenage Love Poems (May Be Prewrites) by ChrissyJean.
330 points, ended October 8, 2007, 49 entries
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Comments
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thats a great love poem. you should put spaces in between parts but other than that very nicely done
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Thanks for entering :-)
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Aww.this is the sweetest, most romantic thing ever,I would melt if someone ever wrote me something like that.
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This poem is adorable. Mucho kudos!
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this is really good! i like how it all rhymes, down to the end. also, great job on avoiding the love cliches. congrats!
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Sweet, she sounds like a special lady... I think you have put into words what so many wish they had, thanks for taking the time to post it...
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aww that really is sweet. you have a nice way with words and i think that any girl who read this would probably also say that you have a very sweet and sensitive side. anywho i really like this alot!
Much Luv
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oh ur welcome
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Thank you!
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Doesn't sound like nothing
It's worth repeating and it's a nicely expressed lovesong
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