First let me be honest my attraction is eternal
my emotions that pertain to you can't be expressed all in this journal
I think when God made you he HAD to have been showin off
cause it's hard to believe that he was being modest
after creating such a work of art
He HAD to have taken his time
more so than when He made nickels and dimes.
Hopefully in time I may find that He made you with ME in mind
Otherwise your presence alone wouldn't trigger my southern uprise.
He HAD to have taken his time
to carve your lips to curve at the ends when you smile
to color your skin to compliment mine
to make you an artist, a woman of my kind.
The shape of your body, the music of your voice
I wouldn't be surprised if wifing you was my choice.
God Had to have to taken His time
to plot the day when we first met
which was the day when we first kissed
a moment I'll never forget.
My desire for your lips to kiss will never ever settle
neither will my desire for your scent, which is sweeter than rose petals
I give a toast to the greatest blueprint God used to configure your figure
you are such a work of art, but I wonder if I'll ever cherish this picture
Because it seems hardly possible, that such a composition was composed for me
Because you're not just a work of art, baby you are a masterpeice
And lets not forget your most valuable part
the lump of gold that was taken and molded into your heart.
And let's not forget to be real either, Come on I can't forget your assets
other than a body so firm, so sexy and athletic
God equipped you with a beautiful pair of breast so expertly fashioned
so tender, supple, skillfully curved and cupped with passion
fromy your small waistline to the abs behind your navel
down to those hips to keep your body stable
around to yo' BUTT, so sensually rounded
pleasantly plump and perfectly mounded
supported by your thighs (shivers) such a wonderful TEAM!!!
Complete with a prize (mmph) that resides in between(deep breath)
This is only half of your beauty, ANY man can recognize
But if only I could write your worth, then every man would realize
that you are a Queen, fit for a king you see?
And you may not see it yet, but baby you are PERFECT to ME!!!
Please tell me what you think
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you read this to me before...and i realize that when i started reading it. i told you before that I LOVE IT and i still do. it's made it up to my top favorites list of your work that i oh so love. great job with this one. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep it up and please return the favor.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Dani~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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This is excellent! I love every line. I am truly finding some extraordinary word artists on this site. I am thoroughly satisfied and excited. I must read more of your work. Great job expressing your emotions for another.
Candice
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Well it's about time Southern uprise huh? You have a way of expressing yourself...I liked it though. It flowed well, although some things I would have taken out so that it might sound more poetic but It's still good. Your expressions are very vivid and straight forward...No woman wants a man who beats around the bush so good job! Keep Writing!!!!
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Well you finally posted this poem huh? I still like it. It's perfect the way it is, though it seems like you were trying to go deeper with this. But anyways, Keep posting and call me when you can.
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ooh ok i like this..and i see a couple few lines that look awfully familiar*cough cough* u kno wat i'm talkin about but yea i like this alot, very beautifully written
Much Luv
♥kaila♥
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