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Can't Escape

Wandering down a path alone
Friendless, I remember my sin
It streaks along behind me.

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  • HeavenScent4U
    October 4, 2007
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    very nice. i love where you took this. this is most fitting....

    "I remember my sin
    It streaks along behind me."

    thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed


  • ParadoxFry
    October 4, 2007
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    Oooh, nice one!

    Interesting take on the prompt!
    Good luck in the contest!