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Remembered Now

Invisible;
slice finger tips
paint the wall crimson;
leave my mark somewhere;
remember me please.

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Picture Prompt: see contest

A contest entry

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    October 4, 2007
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    Great take.
    I can see your words in the picture.

    Be Well


  • HeavenScent4U
    October 4, 2007

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    nothing worse than wanting to be noticed for something, anything and feeling like you are invisible. nicely done. thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed


  • ZachP gold member
    October 4, 2007
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    excellently written, very fitting to the prompt. Good luck in the contest!!!


  • In Too Deep1
    October 4, 2007

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    Art is any expression deemed by the artist as an expression, wonderful take on the prompt and best wishes in the comp

  • Judith Chandler
    October 4, 2007
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    Yes but is it art?

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