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Forsaken Shadow

My empty soul on concrete,
drug behind my shadow,
screaming to heaven,
from devil's playground

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  • Arizona Sunset
    October 5, 2007

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    Oh this seems so sad...empty soul...you did an amazing job with that prompt! Very descriptive, and well worded poem!


  • HeavenScent4U
    October 4, 2007

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    very nicely done. fits the picture very well. thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed