I gave you my all
You threw it away
I allowed you to love me
You simply walked away
I relented to your touch
You used me
Abused me
Got what you wanted and left
But now...
You want me back
It ain't happening
You say that you love me
I'm gonna walk away
You expect me to stoop to your level
...Never in a million years
You thought you had me in the palm of your hand
You were wrong
If you think I'll relent to your 'pretty' face
You are deranged
You've lost me
Who's sorry now?
Author notes
I used the pic
A contest entry
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415 points, ended October 10, 2007, 16 entries
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hey
thanks.. ~Revhead~
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damn sis. this is bad ass in yer face ima kick u in the balls. i love it.!!!!!!
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lmao thanks babe
how r u? it's been a while ay!! get this, I"M JUST ABOUT TO FINISH SKOOL 4EVA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEEEEWWWWW 6wks left xoxo
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