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Bewitched

You bound me
With silken threads,
After a long
Seductive tease.

Around my wrists
You gently wound
Your uniform
Of manhood.
Snatching it tight...
To heighten the spell.

About my ankles
You moved next,
To secure me.
Miles apart it seemed,
You slid closer,
And closer still, until,
Gorged upon my heart,
You chained my soul
To yours,

Now, unfettered,
I am prisoner,
Still, of the hope and fear,
That you will
Tie me again,
With gaudy neckties,
And make love to my soul.


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  • Virgoan silver member
    October 26, 2007

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    The way you gave the images captivates the readers. A well rounded piece fellow poet.

    Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

    VIRGOAN


  • q-pid
    October 10, 2007
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    Bravo... this is really good


  • Expression
    October 9, 2007
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    hmm this is interesting..i liked this it was very beutiful. thank u for entering my contest