Thoughts are running through my mind
Of Lives before and Lives to be
Listening to the silence that surrounds me
Feeling lonely in the crowd,
Voices that speak, but do not reach me
Whispering words I do not hear
I have seen the Destination
Where many went before
My Spirit, lost in emotion,
Can sense you near, yet so far..
The place my true love is found,
Drifting in the mists of time,
Across the border, out of reach...
Darling I need you by my side
To make me whole, to make me stay.
Please give me your hand
And help me find solid ground,
To pull me back into a reality.
Author notes
Believe it.. This has to do with Future..
A contest entry
- What does the future hold for you? by lexy23.
370 points, ended October 6, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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It is so hard to see what others seem to have and feel.I think your words express how many feel.We are all looking for that which we think will complete us.In my youth i felt such things. It was only with the coming of age that i realized that what i saw in other they saw in me.I do think that it is with and through a loved one that we come to be content
Thank you for a wonderful read
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thank you so much for entering. lexy xxx
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Hey.. Thank you for this contest..
I've had this poem for a while, never found reason to publish it. Your contest kinda triggered something that made me think of it..
So, here it is..
And yes, it has a lot to do with future...
Hugz xx Ev
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aww, i loved it! it was very sweet and tender......yet powerful at the same time. very well written my friend! very well written indeed!
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Thank you for your kind words..
So glad you like it
love x Evert
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