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keith

Tears don’t flow down a telephone wire
But crystal clear they run
Tears from loves burning fire
No matter how hurt I feel into your arms I run.

Passion and love inside me twists
No other feelings can reach me
To love every part of you your eyes your wrists
In my heart I have locked you with a golden key

Kind words that you murmur make my life worth living
Each look in my eyes sends shivers up my spine
With you there is no taking your love you keep giving
Ill love and protect you ill fight so your mine.

No walls that we reach are too hard to clime
No trouble that bites us can draw us down
Our hearts can communicate with no words or mime
With every word you can cure my frown

Author notes

this is about my fella Keith! he is amazing! and ya i know i have no punctuation! i think if you cant use it properly don't use it at all

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  • Ray Von
    October 12, 2007

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    Haha loving the authors comments!! This is too sweet for words! My comments have become so repetitive and short! I'm shit at commenting but just so you know. Even if I'm crap at expressing things in comments what i feel when i read your poetry is so deep it blocks me up!
    Maria xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


  • CarolinaSkillet
    October 10, 2007

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    I like this, it's good, I can empthise with you deeply on this, I've found somebody special and love this poem, it speaks so true