Telescope to an Autumn Night
Night sky, clear, cloudless
Telescope to an autumn night
Push Earth convex, peer through
Glass, smudged only by a glaze
Of sleep crossing o’er milky horizons
Of earthen blue-green eyes
Blue skies, black skies, bend spherical
Waterfalls of an Autumn night
Sparkling stars upon this great
Ocean, crashing softly beneath you
On crowded valleys drowning
Under the light of manmade suns
Soft sky, womb, protection
God’s skin to an Autumn night
Wrapping tightly onto your
Heart, beating away the sorrow
Giving into the mountain frost
That freezes time into the air
Sky, Dancing sky, singing sky,
Visual symphony to an Autumn night
Senses shooting away with the
Stars, you’re safe now, darling
God alone can see us on this hillside
Through the sky of autumn night
A contest entry
- LOTS AND LOTS OF POINTS by God is my reality.
900 points, ended October 7, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Somewhere over the rainbow by Starz of Heaven.
525 points, ended February 14, 2008, 17 entries
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490 points, ended April 5, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Thank you so much for sharing your favorite with me, best of luck in the contest.
♥
whisper
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Oh I love this piece thank you for your entry into my contest I wish you luck best wishes and much love always
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Wow, this is really good. Theres just one problem. You forgot to put your name in the author's notes, so If i use this, I can't give you proper credit. Please send me a message with your name, and the title of the poem. It is a very decent write and I like it a lot
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