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Harmless

Carcinogen canards tossed  around as suggestive seeds
spreading their toxic waste fabrications
as a corruptive fertilizer over perception's garden
sprouting as weeds that strangle the blossoms of truth.

They grow with a fragrance
that infects the mind with distortion's essence
causing temporary blindness to facts.

The farmers of prevarication's produce
savoring with lustful visions
when they can harvest the fruit of their labors.

It flourishes best in naiveté's virgin soil
where one's untilled earth of thought
can't tell a weed from a rose.

Until the season of accountability
brings its weathering wash
eroding away the sentiments
of mendacity's distortion thickets
leaving behind a landscape
barren of the foliage promised
by barkers of mythical magic beans.

Trusting hearts left malnourished by the salads
created from what was grown
suffer from malnourishment of hope,
to which the agrarians of falsehood
smile and say,
it is harmless fun.

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Prompt - lie

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  • layla.
    October 26, 2007
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    I loved it... Your imagery rocks


    • penman gold member
      October 26, 2007
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      Thank you for the wonderful comment.


  • lee-sharp
    October 26, 2007

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    wow. very wordy when it didnt have to be. but the message was pretty clear and the metaphor held throughout. well executed. possibly a contender.