I
love to
dance the waltz
with my loved one
cuddled in my arms
To glide to pirouette
gracefully around the floor
When music stops to beg for more
It is true dance enhances romance
Especially when it's done with schmaltz
In a list
A contest entry
- don't rush 2 by layla..
300 points, ended October 26, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - So You Think You Can Dance! by cgirl0410.
1100 points, ended September 2, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Love the step ladder formation. Almost a dance within itself. Love the use of dance terminology. Great piece. Thanks for entering! - cgirl0410
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the prompt??? i don't see the relation between the prompt and the poem. anyway, good luck and thanks for entering.
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not sure how this fits the prompt. internal rhyme was nifty.
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Another great poem by Billbard--"done with schmaltz!" Good luck in the contest!
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