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Longing ...

empty path, lined with evergreens
pinecones glistening in afternoon light
a young girl with feelings like a bubble
through water and bursting out
is the impression i had
deep within my age
after revealing your reply.
i am weak - unable to control myself
and you are so powerful, unashamed
of the akwardness of the situation.
we move toward our spoken desire
and convey emotions only we could understand
hidden beneath our normality
is a being created by us,
left to wonder in agony
because of our convictions.

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