Cat got your tongue?
feeling somewhat undone?
this is my go at fun
Yes, it's my turn now
you're laid up and out
here for a while, no doubt
Thought you were the bomb
had yourself some thrills
now you're over the hill
laid up and out of circulation
now it's up to me to do the baking
but I'll do it up right, no faking
When I love it'll be for real
not like your one-night stand deals
I'm going for the real kill
You needn't bother to call
I won't be in after-all
I'll be doing you, as you recall
So just lay here and take in the view
perhaps you'll feel what I felt
you're so very over-due
You've had your day
now let me see what I can do
I'll have a go now, instead of you
Author notes
Option #1
A contest entry
- Three options, give me your best by Brucie.
415 points, ended October 10, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I really liked the idea behind this, but I found the rhyming to be a little forced, maybe its just the way I read it. Thankyou for your entry, I really enjoyed it. -
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I'm not ashamed to admit that I am a budding poet hahaha probably why you found the force thingy, thanks for your review
lol
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think you the boss now hun, you showed him ..gold gold gold* thumbup* xxpp
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Peter, hahaha just having fun with the contest is all. lol
I love all...
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