I'm looking, looking, looking for you to see;
my heart and soul is not exactly what it can be.
It holds your compassion, it holds your thought.
It comes when you're around, the darkness parts.
Like a phoenix out of the ashes, you rise to me.
A comfort we bring together, embracing passionately.
Twisting together like the eye of a storm;
spinning, swirling together so intimately.
The force of us together consuming all in our path,
the ravaged passion leading our way,
coming, coming, coming to that place at last.
Turning colder and separating,a perfect storm;
will this subdue us until we meet again.
A contest entry
- Make Me Perfection by adsaige.
600 points, ended October 12, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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very nice piece provided here i think you spoke your feelings tremendously well in provided piece i want to wish you good luck in the contest
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