To take you within my embrace
there will never be another,
For the kiss I give thee is
deep and piercing within the soul.
None can forget pain with the
pleasure in my dreary seduction,
You are now my pry, to feast
upon the heart of love and life.
Spiritual and paranormal the
lust you will have for me,
Mind, body, and soul, subdue
to the very touch of you.
Swish of the manual I wear,
and sway of hips to pull,
You into my dark bed.
Where dramatic love sense will
Be played, masochism to drive
us both insane for one another.
You are my marionette, sex slave,
only to I will you answer.
I to be yours in heated passions,
now you my dominion.
Mischief in both our ways
to perform for each other,
I your mistress of the night,
and you my master of love.
Take this heart of ice and
melt it for only do I want
To feel human again within your
sweet confection of lips,
To touch with the mark of our
affections, hands, mouth, and heart.
Dark love, human and creature
of the night, hear my song
As the day is dawn and we retreat
within one another till dusk.
Author notes
Option #2
In a list
A contest entry
- Vampire's Embrace by Vagabond.
450 points, ended October 31, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Win My Heart by tears.of.silence.
400 points, ended June 1, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great work. I felt the power within your write. Very well done. You've been added to the finalist list. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you. Kahy
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The first fifteen lines....
......are killer lines to any man, that is what I think.
Deep down within I am sure every one would give his life to meet this vampire.
I have written on Lycan-dragon-vampires as a man; also as a women vampire to experiment within mind and thought behind the lines.
The write is so tempting that if I were asked to meet this vampire at 12.00 night in a graveyard I would pray to God to give me courage to do so.
Lol
Accepted vampires are what we want them to be.
NOT REAL I can sleep in peace.
An excellent write deserving platinum.
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Thank you so much, and for the add. I wrote this for a dear friend, and lover as one point. It pains me a little to tell you the truth. *sigh* oh well. I totally agree with you.....send me a link if you have one for your reads on Vampires. I love to read as well.
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you have a winner with this piece and i am glad that you chose to take the time to enter this in my contest as well, you have a great talent and i am honored to be able to read your work. Thanks for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest
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woderfully written and really beautiful thank you for entering and best of luck
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wow great job
oh damn that pulled me in! i felt like i was there lol u described an amazing sexy scene so well and yeah mmm...lol
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I think this is one of my favourites from you! (and I'm not usually into dark stuff lol) great write
"To feel human again within your
sweet confection of lips"
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I feel I write a good mixture of dark and light within all my reads. This is one of my favourites as well. Thanks for the comment.
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Oh, I love it, excellent work, very beautiful, dark and even romantic. Thank you so much for entering my contest
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Hey! Thanks for entering my contest! Great work on this write! It was very sensual and very... erm... vampire-ish (can you tell this is the first time i've held a contest in this theme?) Great work anyways, and best of luck in the contest!
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Yes! I love it, Love this new way of writing you have been doing lataly....Great Job!!!!
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Dark side? lol love this one, very sensual, and your poem was smooth, enjoyed this one very much.
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Thank you, it's a love story as old as time.
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Your sensuality and dark side abound within the lines,was transfixed from beginning to end!
A wonderful write by a very wonderful lady.
Let me know when the book comes out.
OK!
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I should write a book, finish the one I started, lol.
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