The smile that embraces me, confirms my thoughts
Thoughts of dedication and selfish wants, we desire
Sheer pastels greet you as you bathe in my beauty
Your words, my acceptance
Candlelight and flames accentuate my choice of seduction
Flames of passion, flickers through darkness
Barely revealing images of each other
You caress what is given
Freely
As my body welcomes your warm beating breast
Love through your eyes shares the joy within mine
Happiness travels down my left cheek as you catch a fragment
Precious you hold it as I’m drawn closer
Your lips assail my neck as if sustenance can be achieved
Limpness overtakes me, as I am elevated within your arms
I welcome your invitation as we lay semi motionless
Holding,
Caressing
The needs, desires and want of lovers
Unknown and known
Clandestine memories elude me as virgin thoughts are restored
Welcoming intimacy’s return
Love is renewed.
Author notes
Seduction, Sensuality and passion shares the same bed. Its just what side you will lay down or get up from
In a list
A contest entry
- seduction by Leslie.
525 points, ended October 16, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - give me love, give me passion, give me sex(prewrites allowed) by Viyanna Rosemarie.
400 points, ended October 25, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - It's sexytime (Erotic Writes) Now accepting PREWRITES!! by Poetic-Goddess.
475 points, ended November 25, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful
This is a very beautiful poem, you say "Flames of passion, flickers through darkness
Barely revealing images of each other
You caress what is given
Freely"
The flames of passion had died down and no one thought that their might be a few burning ambers down, they just needed to be stirred up, this write is great through and through, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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Thank you so much for entering
Very nice indeed
Sounds like a beautiful way
To spend a little time
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thank U so much
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Love that statement in your author's notes..."As my body welcomes your warm beating breast" I like how you used this. I thought this was very soft and sensual. Keep Writing
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Thank U - it was a very nice feel when I wrote it. Thanks for reading
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I love this write, very sensuous and loving. One line made me stumble though. I thought I was reading from a woman's point of view until the line: 'as my body welcomes your warm beating breast'...its great if this is a homoerotic write, but I somehow don't get it from the rest of the piece. Just me, maybe. The rest of the poem is rich in soft imagery, like these: smile that embraces me, candlelight and flames, elevated within your arms, and the best line of all: Your lips assail my neck...mmmmm...shivers...I think I like your romantic writes best...*sigh*..
Peace, Rhonda
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Nope no Homoerotic here. I'll write that when some one ask. I write about women. Just my niche
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thank you very much for your wonderful entry into this contest. i am wishing you the best of luck in all your future writings and in this contest as well. i am looking forward to reading more from you in the very near future. viyanna rosemarie
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this is very very sensual i like the this line right here i thought it was very sensually grabbing for me
"Clandestine memories elude me as virgin thoughts are restored
Welcoming intimacy’s return
Love is renewed. "
i am not sure if i ever read you before because you guys take for ever getting new pieces up but at least that is what i think this was very nice material
sxy99
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I really liked this poem, I really did, sorry that I’m so effusive about it, but I find hard sometimes to like a piece, but this one, somehow reflect the pretty female version of me, which doesn’t happen that often, when I think that the sexual connection is called “love”… and well, I thought that all the description were fitting and beautiful… excellent job!
Thanks for your entry.
Leslie
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beautifully expressed! such delicate wording and imagery! very tastefully done!
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I absolutly adore this all of this. I think this is more than beautiful. to know that a man knows romance and not just sex it is an incouraging thought I know what a virgin's thoughts are and if that can restore you to a virgin's thoughts then wow this amazed me
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Thank U - Its what i was around when i was younger. Like I said. It depends what side of the bed you lay down on. Sex or romance. I choose to think an intelligent man should have romance on the frontal lobe. But thank U so much for your fantastic review. ~ Mykeeee
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Oh!! This is beautiful. You are amazing at the sensual writes
"Your lips assail my neck as if sustenance can be achieved
Limpness overtakes me, as I am elevated within your arms"
I loved these lines, I could almost feel the sensation of lips on my neck. Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest you entered!
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No matter which side you get up from on this one it is sheer ecstasy that is the feeling within after reading this. Your exquisite use of vocabulary and sensitive emotions came shining through brilliantly in this write. It was absolutely breathtaking and I am going to need a cool cloth to wipe the sweat from my brow. You have been given a gift of words and you share them with us unselfishly. I thank you for that as I say kudos for this magnificent piece and wish you the best in the contest with what sounds like the gold to me. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce
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U spoil Joyce - Thank U so much. If it can be said with class and sensitivity, I want to do it. So if I feel something I have to write it. I wanted to write as if I was a woman talking to a man. It was a flow that didn't stop - Hoped it worked - Michael
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Hats off to You
your penning dance one hell
of a seduction. you can feel
the passion jumping from
this poem.
awesome work.
cori
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Son it like mother said; its good to see through the eyes of the female gender, then it will always make a real lover, and about that side of the bed...watchout Now!...strong sensuality and excellent write....Novy
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LOL!! U right, the bed will always have its side. and I'll watch out..................Now!! Thanks Mom
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Great...absolutely Great
This is one hell of a write you got goin on here. I loved it from start to finish as I always do. Mystery lies deep within these lyrics. Sensual souls and seduction has risen in this as well.
Loved it
ephiphany
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Thank ya!!
I decided to reverse gender on this and play the other side. Some times it works, some time the masculine feel still lingers. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the great comments. ~ Mikey
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