A cursed soul
upon the sea
oh looky there
Captain Jack it be
sword by waist
rum in hand
running the sea
but stuck on land
chasing the dark
of all his dreams
his crew beside him
as he deams
an eye for treasure
a tounge for rum
a sorrow song
is what is song
the pearl his heaven
just out of his reach
as standing alone
on that scalding beach
but don't forget
who he be
Captain Jack
governs the sea
the sea his love
the pearl his mate
he'll plundar it back
it's his only fate.
Author notes
This was fun to write. Love the contest. Have fun judging.
A contest entry
- POTC by star wars fanatic.
450 points, ended October 6, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is really fun to read. Love Cap'n Jack Sparrow!
-BON*BON
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it was fun too write
thanks
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good luck
hey good luck in the cotest i love it very spirited i hope you win!
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i really loved this, because i love pirates of the caribbean a lot. ♥ awesome.
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lol it was for a contest, i have the first two movies, waiting for the second
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I like the way you sorta chose one scene and expounded upon it. This was very nicely done and very nicely laid out. Thank for entering the entertainging and thoughtful write.
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good job here and good luck in the contest. I think you did a great job on describing the ever so great Captain Jack Sparrow!
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Thanks
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