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The Lost Lover !

 The Lost Lover

W. Peter Sanci Oct. 4 / 2007


The night was filled with stars.
The moon shone brightly ore’s our heads.
We walked silently hand in hand.
We parted quietly, and I see her no more.

I think of her now and then,
Kindly and tenderly, for I still love her so.
But for now to her, I am far away.
And am probably forgotten, but I shall always remember her.

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  • Virgoan
    October 26, 2007

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    Simple yet captivating in its brevity. Good write.

    Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

    VIRGOAN

    • Pietro456
      December 14, 2007
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      Virgoan !

      Hi ! I think you're becoming my number one fan ! Thanks for all of you're very kind words about my poems ! I really appreciate them so very much.


  • midnight eyes
    October 4, 2007
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    Wow this poem was amazing I liked it a lot keep up the great work.



    Amber

    • Pietro456
      October 4, 2007
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      Midnighteyes !

      Hi ! Well you're not going to believe when I wrote that one. That was one of my very fist poems back in 1974 ! I was young then but still I liked to write a lot. I have a binder full of mt earlier works.Thans for you're very kind remarks that you leave me each time.

      • midnight eyes
        October 5, 2007

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        Pietro789

        Hey there! Yes I did like this poem a lot you should post more of your earlier poems I would love to see them.

        Amber

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