Midnight Seduction by irishmidnight at All poetry

Smoldering eyes.

Soft growls

Fingers dance across skin.

Grazing sensitive points

Awakening carnal desire.

A forbidden romance

teeth against flesh.

Sultry cries escaping.

Sweat drenched bodies.

Meeting in mutual longing.

Breath taking kisses.

Tongues brush.

Breath catching.

Moving in rhythm.

Together as one.

Fires ignite in the soul.

Hearts beat rapidly in-sync.

A mere touch excites.

One night,

Of an eternal lust.

Author notes

Kinky Baby!! **laughs and growls softly** tell me what crosses your mind when you read this...I'm curious!!! **winks playfully**

A contest entry

give me something with intensity by Kumgang. 300 points, ended January 10, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Opinons please

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Sanshay
June 23, 2008
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A one night stand of much pleasure and intensity, but sometimes those are the most erotic of all.
CherryOnTop
November 24, 2007
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Eternal passion and lust.Seductive and blissful.
Bob Fox
October 26, 2007
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Oh Boy
Makes an older guy just sigh & say... Please God give me one more shot
foryourowngood
October 7, 2007
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Complete togetherness. Two people completely in-sync with each other.
PastelMoons
October 7, 2007
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Saucy!!!!
This is a very sexy write!
I love it!
~Pastel
lyrebird
October 7, 2007

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very seductive, it leaves a lot to the imagination.
well done, darl.
- irishmidnight
  October 7, 2007
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  sinnocence
  It does doesn't it? I love playing with imaginations...it makes your mind work...**grins** Thanks for the comment hun!!
Knight70
October 6, 2007
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enticing imagery....
I find this to be an "igniting" read. Thank you!

Knight70
- irishmidnight
  October 7, 2007
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  Knight70
  Why thank you..and that is an intriguing choice of words...I love it...**laughs**
Ravenblood
October 6, 2007
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trippy as hell. keep up the good work, *huggles*

Claire-Anne
- irishmidnight
  October 6, 2007
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  Raven blood
  **grins** thanks hun!! **hugs back**
LadyDementia
October 6, 2007

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Beautiful
Very sensual, beautifully written with a great flow to it. It was great to read, just right, not over the top or so faint we haven't a clue. I adore the background to, it matches the piece very well, simply put, amazing hunni!
- irishmidnight
  October 6, 2007
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  PINKTAT
  Thanks so much...lol...i decided not to take it over board...lol..and short and sensual can be more fun anyhow...lol...thanks for the comment!!
Endeavor
October 5, 2007

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Very Good

Together as one.
Fires ignite in the soul.
Hearts beat rapidly in-sync.
A mere touch excites.
One night,
Of an eternal lust.

That is three good works in words a row
I will add you to my favorites

Rick
- irishmidnight
  October 6, 2007
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  ENDEAVOR
  **blushes** why thank you!!!
Deirbhile
October 5, 2007

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Stirring
A beautiful piece. Its very descriptive, and flows well. The background is an added bonus. Great work.
- irishmidnight
  October 5, 2007
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  thanks babe....**grins**
near1202apocalypse
October 4, 2007

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very lustful
its very good! i love the way you put it so that it feels like two people are intertwined so deeply!
- irishmidnight
  October 6, 2007
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  near1202apocalypse
  sexxy sexxy baby!! LOL!!!
BluArtistEyes
October 4, 2007

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Seductive
To almost quote the title a very seductive & beautiful piece of poetry... The lines are all alluring and captivating making you want to read on... beautifully written as always... and awesome imagery...
- irishmidnight
  October 6, 2007
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  BOTTLEOFMEMORIES
  I adore your comments!! They always leave me smiling!!!
moon2u
October 4, 2007

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ooooooooooooooo this one is hot Irish
I wrote a poem with the same title but it was about a Vampire
I am loving your poetry
moon2u
- irishmidnight
  October 4, 2007
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  moon2u
  Thanks my dear!! **grins** I had fun writeing this one...ill have to go and check out your poem with the same title if I haven't already.
Little-Marshmallow
October 4, 2007

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Wow amazing poem darling, very sensual. I love the way you describe things, you kinda hint at them and make it clear thought cryptic words what you mean rather than just straight out saying it. Takes a skilled writer to be able to do that well. Congrats on another great write hun i really enjoyed reading it
- irishmidnight
  October 4, 2007
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  **grins**
  Thanks hun!! I always value your comments greatly!! They mean so much to me!!!