His lips trace her body,
like a feather traces silk.
soft and slow,
the tension in her grows.
Slowly he runs his fingers through her soft brown hair,
whispers he loves her,
skin so bare.
Looks into her deep blue eyes,
a thousand I love you's mixed with a thousand cries.
Holds on tightly as she begs him just to be,
endless wonders in a sea,
filled with thee.
A rush of pleasure,
mixed with a rush of pain.
Its driving her crazy,
His touch is driving her insane.
And in this final moment,
when their souls become one.
The world feels complete,
the waiting is done.
Author notes
I wrote about what i know.
A contest entry
- seduction by Leslie.
525 points, ended October 16, 2007, 15 entries
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Comments
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Very nice piece, there were some excellent touches of sensuality that I appreciated, and at the same time I felt a bit of sadness and pain, which I’m for it, and well the semi rhyming structure that I sensed, although is not my fav, it work for you and your piece, Great Job!
Thanks for your entry.
Leslie
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