Into the moonlight
I drive away
No tears shed
Nothing left to say
Just a memory
And then it fades
In a list
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nice
I like short poems and to the point too - - read your profile - perhaps you can tell me why the north star is always north and the southern cross always south ? - or are they ? - I wrote a poem about "Two Poles" you may like - Hey I like the rhyme in this poem of yours and the short message - Bless God -
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Good
You were kind enough to read and comment on one of my pieces, so I thought I would return the favor.
Although this is an abbreviated poem, it states a simple and profound truth that can not be ignored.
Memories are a precious treasure, but time erodes away the sharp edges, and all that is left is a fading residue. When we remember a time, we remember moments, little snippets time that change their character with each passing year. Many times, what we remember has little to do with the reality we lived.
Well done.
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This was great for a short poem! I really like it!
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A short but not short in meaning poem
the kind I like
the end of a love with no hard feelings
life goes on tomorrow is another day
liked it very much
short and to the point
thank you Anne
Nick
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Very nice
Powerful and honest and a great image.
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reminds me of a "life's lesson" learned the hard way...short and to the point, I like this.
Rory
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short but sweet. yeah, i like the term 'polaroid' too.
the fading takes awhile though, eh? And the more poingiant, the slower the fading...
does 'shed' need to bet here in 'no tears shed'? -
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"the fading takes awhile though, eh? And the more poingiant, the slower the fading..." Your sharp!
Anna
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aww..that's sad. A clearly defined Polaroid of a broken moment
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