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Wonder

Where did I come from?

Looking up at the sky

I ponder how the world around me came to be

I never thought about it before

They talk about the almighty

The omega

I don't really understand what they mean

If the almighty creator really exists

And he/she really loves me

Why does the creator make me suffer?

Why is my mommy gone?

Why does daddy drink and hit me?

Why would the creator make their own people suffer?

But if not the creator, then who? what?

It's impeccable, there must be something up there

Someone who made all this happen

Some Supernatural force

I don't really understand now

And I'm sure nobody really understands

The true meaning and creation of life

But sometimes, life feels like a punishment

Author notes

Written from the point of view of a 6 year-old.
Words for wordbank: Almighty, omega, impeccable, supernatural,never.

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  • liquidmindforever
    October 6, 2007
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    Dear Poet,
    Your piece must begin by raising a question. Then you must place option number and name of option along with 5 words from the word bank in author's notes.
    Be sure to use 5 of the wordbank's words.
    After you've done so, please contact via im with title and contest name and I will then read and comment.
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