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Endless Trek Of Life

My dreams are crashing all around
Scattered across the barren ground
There is no comfort to be found
On the endless trek of life

My thoughts are drowned inside of me
Building my lake of misery
I look so hard but no relief
On the endless trek of life

My loves are thrust out of myself
Smashed against an empty shelf
Is there no trusting to be delt
on the endless trek of life

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  • velveteen
    November 13, 2007
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    forgot my applause, XD


  • velveteen
    November 13, 2007

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    mmm, dark, and I love dark.

    I like it... I like the form.

    I wrote something new, too, haha.