The little stars in your eyes shine
like the diamonds embedded in the ebony sky
Such a gentle touch; it takes my breath away
Such a precious gift; the life you have given
you've given meaning to what I've always known...
a life beautiful and soft
You breathe life into me; gently and softly
Delicate tears streak my cheeks
washing away a mask of fear
A rose in the weeds; beautiful to behold
I touch you, and I do not fear
What flaws have you? For I do not see them...
Perfection is you; try and see it
The rain falls and refreshes the earth,
breathing in new life through you
Blissful tears cleanse the heart and
windows to the soul show the beauty of us
A contest entry
- ETERNAL Love and Friendship Inspired --INVITE ONLY !! -- ONLY for the Poets listed to enter by Stardust-luvr.
3250 points, ended November 6, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thank you for your beautiful words of true faith not only for the prompt but as a mental lesson to myself that the emotional hell i had been facing needs to be relinquished and take a good look in hte mirror that I am and always will be the angelic star I am always called thank you for your entry and many loving blessings always xxx
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A very lovely piece here sis!
Thanks for sharing, and all the best!
Bro Timothy
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So very beautiful, girlfriend! Just caresses the heart with inspiring and precious emotions...great job here...best of luck to ya.....smiles, Terry
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SANDY:
Your works are always something I look forward to reading everyday, since I started on this site, and I truly appreciate them.
The gentleness and the the simplicity in which you describe the beauty from within is astonishing..... Thank you for the invite, it was worth it.....
Be blessed with love, light and all things good... Always.
Your friend forever,
AngelicMistress...Tanya
*hug*
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Beautiful write. I liked the ending. It is very true that we must be grateful for the people who are in our lives and appreciate the time we have with them. For, we never know when the day will come when they might pass on.
I really like the quote in the pic that this poem was inspired by. true words to live by and food for thought. Good luck in the contest.
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Excellent
Awww, this is another powerful creation with drips with such beautiful images and passions. Best of luck in the contest.
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My friend, this is a very touching and pure write. You pen with such intimacy. I have really enjoyed yourpen since being on this site and I would like to say that it is so refreshing to have you and your truly romantic heart to return. Best wishes in the comp
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purdy purdy
nice write 
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