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Mrs. Smith

Confined situation
Smothers temptation
But leaves me breathless still

With all that you are
Being all that I need
You are tugging at my free will

The ring ‘round your finger
Makes a bold statement
A statement I cannot contest

But your smile unabridged
Lures my heart by a string
Sadly left to silently confess

For who shall fall victim
If this endeavor shall fail
and leave bitter words on tongue?

Be it you, broken oath
and with a feeling of shame?
Or I with wounded heart unsung?

I shall ask that you stay
and consummate your vows
Though my heart and mind shall not rest

If I approached with my plan
Wore my heart on my sleeve
Would it have been me you couldn’t contest?

Author notes

Option 10: Forbidden(If my friend's wall could talk...oh boy! I wrote this with him in mind. Naughty boy! Thinking those thoughts about a married woman!)But we are all human, right?

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  • Megan Awesome
    October 18, 2007

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    Wow. Deffinately something forbidden. This is just what I was looking for with that option. This is a very VERY good poem. I like the way you worded it and the way it flowed. This is a great poem. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!!!
    Megan