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The Calling

My nostrils flare,
The salty air
Is penetrating me.

I can't resist
The ocean's mist.
I'm fated for the sea!

And waves may fall,
The Sirens call,
But it's my destiny!


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  • ma belle
    October 8, 2007

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    I liked this with its rhyme and perfect iambics. Short yet sweet that ended on a sour note possibly for the siren who had no other fate. My best, ♥ Belle

  • star wars fanatic
    October 5, 2007

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    A bit of a stretch for the contest theme, but I love the word choice in this. I imagined it being turned into a song even. Grest imagery; keep up the great work.


  • TheDeadMan
    October 5, 2007
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    very nice wrte.

  • Justin3
    October 5, 2007
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    Short is sweet and this poem really proves it! Excellently written!

  • Eusebius
    October 4, 2007
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    Lubbers All!

    Ar, my lubber, 'ere's 'opin' ol' Cap'n Davy Jones don't take you of a Friday!


  • xXEndless-PainXx
    October 4, 2007
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    Ooo! that left me wantin more!!
    Savvy
    oxox

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