You entered my life on one sunny day
making me feel so complete
Now I spurn any moment I may have to spend away
from you and your tiny little feet
The first time that I heard your voice
my heart made a sudden leap
You left momma with no other choice
but a shower of thanks to reap
Your lips look like a rosy red bud
Your perfect in every way
Through your veins run royal blood
You’ll be an angel to stay
Your presence fill each passing day
leaving my heart so pleased
I love my time with you each day
‘cause from your joy I can feast
From your head to your toes you are so sweet
I can see how you could leave the print
in my heart with those tiny little feet
Author notes
I hate leaving my baby each morning when I need to go work. Wish I could rather spend my time with her!!!
Love you my sweet Aneka ♥♥♥
In a list
A contest entry
- #47 Something to laugh about by daviscth.
475 points, ended February 27, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Have you ever seen such a beautiful child ???
Comments
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I remember those days, and here I am getting ready to watch my youngest graduate from high school this week
Enjoy it while you can honey! Times flies!!
You did a great job on this one!
Congrats on the Honorable Win!!!
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GREAT
Very Touching
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Wonderful
This poem is so sweet.
I really like how yoiu changed it up at the end with the three lines.
It's a heartwarming poem and I give it 4 stars
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AWWWW! This write is so sweet. Overflowing with emotion and love. The background is beautiful as well. Congrats on the HM.
Crystal
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This is such an imagery filled poem overflowing with love. I do love the background. Is it maybe a pic of your baby?
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Your lips look like a rosy red bud
Your perfect in every way
Through your veins run royal blood
You’ll be an angel to stay
Beautiful. Poem as well as the baby. Very sweet, a lure to even kiss.
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very sweet!
the answer to the question above is, she is certainly a doll! this is very sweet and loving piece,and I know that feeling so well!
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Love the background!!!
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OMG! That is the most precious background I have ever seen! Goes perfectly with such a lovely little poem! You are so lucky to have such a beautiful baby! I want one!
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Ag ek huil sommer weer. Dis so n nice stuk. En so n nice ma en kind. hoe dan nou anders as om te lag as ek julle in my lewe het.
This is awesome and may she always bring you the smiles that you deserve, and who knows one day you might be Rapanzule and just be her mom and not just a breadwinner
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Hart felt write -
this is a cute poem - right from the heart - the rhyme and flow are great - you are blessed - to have a little angel like Aneka - count your many blessing every day - Bless God - Joe
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I bookmarked this poem
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This poem makes me smile ear to ear. You are so lucky and I envy you. Aneka is a pure joy. My wish is to be a mom some day. You are so blessed.
Love,
Amera♥ -
She is ALIVE and WELL..... I just hate leaving her to sit in my office all day!!
Would much rather be her educator than the bread-winner. But hey! I am no Rapunzel, I do not sit and wait to be saved. I'm Rebekah, I do it myself.
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She's beautiful, this poem is beautiful and the emotion is so powerful. This poem has me in tears. In reply to your question; "Have you ever had to leave your baby???". No, I've never been a mom but it is my dream someday. I can't imagine the pain of losing the most precious thing in your life. Thank God there is a heaven and we will all be brought together again someday.
Love,
Amera♥
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Soft and well spoken piece from the heart.
Nicely written
VIRGOAN -
Tender and warm
A very tender write that paints a warm sincere and loving picture that is a pleasure to read and best of all allows us to generate similar feelings of love to yourself.
Barry -
This is absoultely beautiful and such a wonderful tribute to your little girl. You have written straight from the heart and it shines through every word. Great write.
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oh this is so beautiful =]
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