Our love is obscured by your intentions.
While your prison of isolation leaves you grim,
You subtly clutch your deceptions.
How vivid your presences is in the falling rain,
Cleverly concealing the zones of your life,
And only your misting breath gives you away.
But I know that your love is there...
I can feel it tingling on my untouched skin.
Author notes
"Blissful Poison Faerie Nymph" Word bank 2
A contest entry
- A distant melody-many options by Coco Mara.
600 points, ended October 23, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I thought that your poem was lovely. I also like how you used all of the words in the word bank in your piece. Thank you for sharing this piece.
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Wow...Lady...this is SUPERB...
I love the voice of this write...soft and enticing the reader forward...
this is POETRY and I am delighted to find your words before my grateful eyes this morning!
Good luck in the contest! This is a real jewel!
Blessings! Tammy
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very nice
good write very well written
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OMG!!!!!! THAT IS AMAZING You are my Favorite poet! this poem is Amazing you should send it into a conest I know you will win First place
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